2004-11-06 [Ri'hala]: Well, there is my short story. Construcive Critisism is welcome, so let me know what you think ^_^.....oh and one other thing ...................................................................................................................................................................TELL ME THE TRUTH ABOUT WHAT YOU THINK I REALLY NEED TO KNOW BECAUSE THE STORY WON'T GET ANY BETTER IF YOU DON'T Thankies and enjoy ! ^_^

2004-11-07 [Schitz]: that's so sad... *grabs tissue*

2004-11-07 [Ri'hala]: nice to know someone cares <_< lmao ^_^

2004-11-08 [KnightAngel]: yeah.. sad... but very good!

2004-11-08 [KnightAngel]: good written i mean..

2004-11-08 [Ri'hala]: ha ha lol thankies for the comment ^_^

2004-11-08 [Ri'hala]: *wonders if anyone has cried Irl over this story yet <_<* *shifty-eyes* my dad did....heh...because he wuvs meh...<_<

2004-11-08 [Laidreal]: it totally sucks--JUST KIDDING! i luvs it ri! ^-^

2004-11-08 [Ri'hala]: thankies *laughs at the joke nervously* ^_^;;

2004-11-15 [Ri'hala]: come on i need reveiws! i need suggestions! *cackles and dies*

2004-11-16 [someelf]: -thinks it's GOOOOOOOOD- o.o -.- o.o (blink XP)

2004-11-16 [Ri'hala]: *cackles and huggles her aunteh* thankies elfy

2004-11-17 [someelf]: *huggles back* no problemo :p

2004-11-17 [Ri'hala]: ^_^

2004-11-18 [Konobi]: ;_; Wahhhh...that's so.....sad.....:'((

2004-11-18 [Ri'hala]: << did you cry? i'm keeping tally of those who cry....if i get fourteen people to cry because of the story my dad is giving my money, candy, and then he's gonna try to get it published for me......*cackles* if i don't he gets the candy and the money T.T

2004-11-18 [Ri'hala]: i need candy......<<

2004-11-19 [fallyn]: That's wonderful! So sad, very touching. It seems so real. You really should get it published if you can! I'm really trying to think of something to critise...but I really can't see anything wrong... Write more! That's all I'm saying!

2004-11-19 [Ri'hala]: *cackles* a REAL REVEIW thankies so much ^_^

2004-11-24 [lordone]: i love the story i was so sad

2004-11-24 [*~Muse~*]: Wow, that was reall really really... great. I agree with everyone else. U should get those published if u can. great job, Hannah.

2004-11-25 [Ri'hala]: Thankies but, peeps, please leave comment for the stories in the story's page ok? it gets confusing x . x lol

2004-11-27 [Ri'hala]: ô.o someone else is watching this page? who??? tell me!

2004-12-01 [The Anansi]: wooot! I loved the Soldier's Tale ^_^

2004-12-03 [Ri'hala]: thankies ^_^ how'd you like the others?...oh wait...they aren't there yet ;-; need...to...get...working!

2004-12-07 [Ri'hala]: yay! i *finally* got started on converting Windrider from paper to Microsoft word.......this is gunna take forever *twitches*

2005-01-11 [Laidreal]: uh, ri, in case you hadn't noticed, um, THREE OF YOUR STORIES ARE STRANGELY ABSENT!!!! just letting ya know...>_>

2005-01-13 [Ri'hala]: Pshhhh on you T.T...*is soooo lazy about this stuff......* lol ;P

2005-03-02 [speakyourwords]: aw! The soldier one was really sad... very well written though. 

2005-03-03 [Ri'hala]: Thankies ^_^